Jarl 35, comments please

[Icro]

My LGS is having a small campaign that I entered in. After loosing my first game handily :( I've changed my list to this.

Jarl
-Mauler
-EBDT

Fell Caller
Janissa
KSB min
max Fenns + UA
Whelps
Gobber bellows crew

I'm pretty new to the game as this is my first tourney/campaign, any thought and comments would be extremely helpful. I believe theres another troll player, two menoths, a legion, and a circle player(who I lost to with pKrueger).

[Trollz]

Ok, I'll comment, but only because you asked nicely.

I don't often find myself taking the KSB with Jarl just because of his armies' mobility and how he tends to use up all his fury, leaving little for the KSB. Running two heavies seems excessive at 35 points for Jarl. I like the heavy/light or heavy and 2 lights at 35 with Jarl. An axer can further accelerate your already faster beasts with Jarl, which can really catch some opponents off guard. When you have the lower fury management burden from lessening your beasts, you'll be able to drop the whelps. Without the whelps I'd recommend a chronicler for the Fenns to really increase their tar pit potential. I don't know what models you have, so I can't really suggest a list for you.

If you could post what models you have, I could probably help you more than the aforementioned.