Homebrew Warcaster Man-O-War Kommander Valcheski & Crimson Queen Character Jack

[Koudys]

Here is my take on a Man-O-War Warcaster that I think Khador needs. Tell me what you think.

Man-O-War Kommander Alexi Valcheski (Khador Man-O-War Warcaster) Warjack Points +4
SPD 4
STR 9
MAT 8
RAT 6
DEF 12
ARM 17
CMD 9
FOC 6
DMG 22

Weapons
Annihilation (Axe) – POW 7
- Reach
- Critical Decapitation
Shield – POW 2
- Beat Back

Special Abilities
Overtake
Steady
Elite Cadre (Man-O-War) – Friendly Man-O-War models/units gain Brutal Charge

Spells
Fury
Inhospitable Ground

Feat – Vengeance of the North
All models/units in this models control area gain Retalitory Strike & all Non-Warjack models/units gain Vengeance. Vengeance of the North lasts for the round.


Crimson Queen (Character Spriggan Warjack) PC 12
SPD 4
STR 12
MAT 7
RAT 4
DEF 10
ARM 19

Weapons
War Axe – POW 7
- Reach
Assault Shield – POW 2
- Shield (+2 ARM)

Special Abilities
Bulldoze
Affinity [Valcheski] – While in Valcheski’s control area, Crimson Queen gains Steady
Set Defence
Shield Guard

[Koudys]

edited some things i was notified on by my local hobby shop guys. U guys like?

[Septimus]

Hmm. I think steady is a very potent thing to have on a caster, but he more than pays for it in WJ points and low DEF. I like the feat- I'd change the second part to just be "units", as vengence is fairly useless on solos. He could probably use at least one more spell; two is an absurdly low amount. At least Razor Wind.

[Lord Tyrant peers]

I'd drop bulldoze from the spriggan and change retaliatory strike to defensive strike

[ralbas]

Edit:

All Friendly models/units in this models control area gain Retalitory Strike & all Friendly Non-Warjack models/units gain Vengeance. Vengeance of the North lasts for the round.