Noob list, try to learn how to build a decent list

[MarViolet]

Criticism would be most welcome as I am trying to decide what to buy
35 pts
Severius
Crusader
Vanquisher
revenger
Vassal
Min Choir
Hierophant
Min TFG and UA
Paladin x2
Dartan Vilmon
Deliverer Sunburst Crew

Note: Im looking to do something different from the norm, as I do see alot of errants, avatar and blessing of vengeance in most of serevius lists. Taking them seems to eat up all your points and leave little room for anything else. If it helps I was an eldar player in 40k and chose severius because he reminded me most of eldrad.

[Venom321]

Well Blessing gives +2 to a spell cast each turn aka ashes to ashes at a pow 13 with eye of menoth up and an arc node for a very squishy caster. Avatar is up to you. A reckoner/templar is also a solid choice. Eye of menoth rewards you with a better chance to hit and more damage so errants who have both range and melee with quick work are an obvious choice. I've heard flameguard cleansers are fun with him but they dont' see alot of play elsewhere due to poor rat and def/arm.

[Alzer]

I think your list is pretty decent as it is. Only suggestion is to drop the Sunburst Crew, Max the Temple Flameguard, and upgrade your Revenger to Blessing.

[DaNDeMeNTo]

I think your list is pretty decent as it is. Only suggestion is to drop the Sunburst Crew, Max the Temple Flameguard, and upgrade your Revenger to Blessing.

I second what Alzer said. Definitely take the full TFG... a min tarpit unit at 35pts is never gonna cut it. TFG are SO MUCH better when maxed out. And the +1 point for BoV is a solid investement.