Strengths and weaknesses of two 35pt lists made for SR2012 tournament restrictions

[DrGiggles]

My first list is an Adeptis Rahn 35pt spell flinger army. I think it pretty much speaks for itself with what it wants to acomplish.

Adeptis Rahn Shyeel + 6
- Chimera - 6
- Phoenix - 10
Dawnguard Sentinels (Leader and 9 Grunts) - 9
- Dawnguard Sentinel Officer & Standard - 2
- Soulless Escort - 1
House Shyeel Battle Mages (Leader and 5 Grunts) - 5
Arcanist - 1
House Shyeel Artificer - 3
House Shyeel Magister - 2
House Shyeel Magister - 2

What problems do you guys think this list will run into? I can think right off the bat that stealth could be an issue. Any other thoughts on this list will be appreciated. (On a side note, is the House Shyeel Articifer in Rahn's tier list?)

My second list is kind of unique. I think it will counter stealth much better than the Rahn list.

Kaelyssa, Night's Whisper + 7
- Griffon - 4
- Manticore - 8
Dawnguard Sentinels (Leader and 9 Grunts) - 9
- Dawnguard Sentinel Officer & Standard - 2
Stormfall Archers (Leader and 3 Grunts) - 5
Arcanist - 1
Dahlia Hallyr & Skarath - 9
Ghost Sniper - 2
Mage Hunter Assassin - 2

It is more this list that I need help with. I'm not sure how well it will do against most tournament players, but I do think it is a well rounded list IMO. Anyways, if you guys can offer any input/comments/concerns/constructive critiscism I would appreciate it greatly. For the most part I would like to know if these lists could have any merit in a tourney/event, or if you think they would crash and burn.

Thanks for the help.

[rwould]

The Artificer is not in Rahn's tier list.
For Kaelyssa I'd drop the Ghost Sniper and Dahlia and add Discordia and a second arcanist. You've then got guaranteed cover on her feat for stealth and no charging.
Other changes would generally come down to personal preference on models. Personally I can't imagine taking two lists and not using a unit of Mage Hunter Strike Force for example.