I'd re-word this more simply: "A living model hit by this attack forfeits its movement or action during its next activation. This attack causes no damage."Weapons:
Name: Aria (it's a bow)
Stun Arrow (*attack) - When target enemy living model is in range of this weapon, make a ranged attack roll against the model, if it is hit by this attack, it suffers no damage but forfeits movement or action during it's next activation.
These look fine too.Melee:
Weapon POW: 2
Other Abilities: Stealth
Bard Song (*Action) - Select one of the following effects, friendly living model's within this model's command range gain that effect for this turn:
-Anthem: Affected model's gain +1 STR.
-Drunken Bard: Affected model's gain -1 on command check roll's.
-March Song: Affected model's gain +1 SPD.
OVERALL: Very interesting model. He looks to be a good support piece without stepping on Rhupert's toes.