P-Thags Slow Grow Help!

[atomsk216]

As someone starting out I would like a good idea of what I should invest my money into. Really enjoyed the format of another up and comer's post. Decided I would do the same. Look forward to your guys' suggestions for list building and purchasing.

Week 2 - 15pts must include battlebox

Lylyth Battlebox + Forsaken

Week 3 - 25pts must include battlebox

Lylyth Battlebox
Nephilim Bolt Thrower
Legionaries Min Unit
Forsaken

Week 4 - 25pts must include battlebox but can swap caster

PThag Battlebox
Nephilim Bolt Thrower
Legionaries Min Unit
Shepard

Week 5 - 35pts must include battlebox but can swap caster

PThag Battlebox
Scythean
Nephilim Bolt Thrower
Legionaries Max Unit

Week 6 - 35pts open.

P-Thag
Carnivean
Scythean
Nephilim Bolt Thrower
2x Shredder
Legionaries Max Unit
2x Strider Deathstalkers

Tell me what you guys think, general impressions and most importantly what you think I am lacking in/could improve upon. Thanks in advance.

[atomsk216]

After considerable research and no feedback I think my slow ascension to greatness will look much more like this.

Week 2 - 15pts must include battlebox

Lylyth Battlebox + 2x Shepards (I feel the shepards will help a lot more then a single forsaken when it comes to Plylyth's very small control area and the need for healing.)

Week 3 - 25pts must include battlebox

Lylyth Battlebox
Seraph
2x Shepards
Strider Deathstalker
(I read and reread all of Thunder God's amazing posts and felt the seraph had earned a spot. The strider is there for solo hunting and unit plinking.)

Week 4 - 25pts must include battlebox but can swap caster

PThag and Battlebox
Scythean
2x Shepards
(Pthag seems like he wants some tough hitting beasts not only to buff but to best utilize his feat.)

Week 5 - 35pts must include battlebox but can swap caster

PThag and Battlebox
Scythean
1X Shepherd
Striders+Ua
Strider Deathstalker
(Now not only can I cause some crazy beast havok but also shoot arrows to my hearts content!)

Week 6 - 35pts open.

P-Thag
Carnivean
Scythean
Seraph
Shredder
Striders+Ua
1x Shepard
(A list heavily influenced by the wonderful writings of Thunder God that I hope works pretty well as an all comers list)

Tell me what you guys think of the new and hopefully improved lists!