Helion
11-24-2009, 04:03 AM
This is a story I had whipped up a few weeks ago for a thread in the old forums. I'm quite proud of it, and just wanted to make sure it was saved from oblivion. I've put thought towards updating it, and making a full fledged story out of it. Comments are appreciated. ;)
Ex-Lord Assassin Morghoul stumbled on through the wastes. Battered from combat, his blade still caked in the blood of his fellow Skorne, he sought only one thing. Survival. In the dead of night he came upon the crossing his rightful liege had wrought. One that would have all but guaranteed the prosperity of his people in another time. Now it was but another obstacle that he had to overcome. Coming upon the first set of venator sentries, he stopped. Knowing single mistake would cost him his life, he swiftly disabled each sentry one after another without so much as a sound. After stiking the final killing blow, he disappeared amongst the terrain of the place. His instincts were sharp, his eyes sharper. Utilizing every skill in the art of silence he had ever learnt, and powered by his sheer will to live, he made his way across the abyss. Even his hardened heart felt the throb of guilt at every sentry he slew, but he knew that to be caught would mean death.
It had been some weeks since the debacle at the Abyssal Fortress. Makeda and her lieutenants stormed the walls in perfect synchronization, yet the forces of the Great Deceiver, Vinter Raelthorn were just too much. In the midst of the battle, Morghoul had witnessed the dual which saw Vinter sever the very head of his liege from her shoulders. In a rage the likes of which few have ever beheld, Morghoul threw himself at his foe, knowing that to fail would doom his race to a fate worse than death. One of servitude. Yet the powerful warrior was too much. Effortlessly deflecting blow after blow from the Lord Assassin, Vinter saw his opening. With a speed no man should be capable of, Vinter drove a great blow with his gauntleted fist into Morghoul's diaphragm, stunning him just long enough for a final death blow. Knowing he had failed, Morghoul channeled all the power he could muster into a final wave of agony centered on Vinter. The ploy worked, Vinter lost momentum long enough for Morghoul to roll away from the blade. But Morghoul had only bought enough time for a frantic escape into the wastes of his homeland.
Weeks passed as he traveled. He did not know to what end of the earth he would have to go to have his revenge, but he knew that he would have it, no matter the cost. He cast aside his armor and donned a cloak purloined from a small village. With this disguise he was but another traveler on the roads of the iron kingdoms.
After wandering for what seemed an eternity, Morghoul found himself being waylaid by Knights in Silver armor, bearing a the banner of the Cygnus. The Knights demanded he remove his cowl and show his face. After refusing in their tongue, which the Lord Assassin had learned to better his trade, the first Knight drew his sword. Gripping his blade, Mercy tightly under the cloak with one hand and readying the Fan of Shadows with the other, Morghoul prepared to burst into the flurry of movement which would end this exchange. But moments before he sprang to action, he found himself being held tightly in place by an unseen force. Using what willpower he had, he attempted to break free of the spell. But despite his best effort, he could not concentrate any energy in his defense. It all seemed to leave him until he felt very empty. A young Cygnaran woman stepped into view wielding a spear which seemed to be the cause of Morghoul's situation. Addressing him, the woman introduced herself as Major Victoria Haley. In flawless Cygnaran, Morghoul identified himself as a pauper named Jekel. Seeing through his ruse, Haley ripped the robe from around Morghoul, exposing the Skorne for what he was. Without the protection of his armor, there was little chance Morghoul would escape.
Yet, even still, Morghoul refused to give in to fate. Using his anguish as a weapon, Morghoul ripped at the minds of the gathered Cygnarans with a wave of agony so intense, it blinded every man and woman present. After a few moments, Morghoul felt the grip on him loosen from Haley, and he was free. Calmly Morghoul walked to haley, pushing aside the few Knights who attempted to interpose themselves between him. Tearing the spear from her he calmly cut away one of the plates surrounding her right arm. She attempted to fight him off with her bare hands, but she was still reeling from the mental shock. Grabbing the now exposed pressure point, Morghoul forced Haley onto her knees. The Knights around them started to regain their sight, and fresh troops who heard the commotion came charging near the crowd, hoping to arrive in time to save their commander.
Before a shot was fired or blade raised in anger, Morghoul spoke one word in a booming voice which belied his frail body. "Parlay!"
End, Part 1.
Ex-Lord Assassin Morghoul stumbled on through the wastes. Battered from combat, his blade still caked in the blood of his fellow Skorne, he sought only one thing. Survival. In the dead of night he came upon the crossing his rightful liege had wrought. One that would have all but guaranteed the prosperity of his people in another time. Now it was but another obstacle that he had to overcome. Coming upon the first set of venator sentries, he stopped. Knowing single mistake would cost him his life, he swiftly disabled each sentry one after another without so much as a sound. After stiking the final killing blow, he disappeared amongst the terrain of the place. His instincts were sharp, his eyes sharper. Utilizing every skill in the art of silence he had ever learnt, and powered by his sheer will to live, he made his way across the abyss. Even his hardened heart felt the throb of guilt at every sentry he slew, but he knew that to be caught would mean death.
It had been some weeks since the debacle at the Abyssal Fortress. Makeda and her lieutenants stormed the walls in perfect synchronization, yet the forces of the Great Deceiver, Vinter Raelthorn were just too much. In the midst of the battle, Morghoul had witnessed the dual which saw Vinter sever the very head of his liege from her shoulders. In a rage the likes of which few have ever beheld, Morghoul threw himself at his foe, knowing that to fail would doom his race to a fate worse than death. One of servitude. Yet the powerful warrior was too much. Effortlessly deflecting blow after blow from the Lord Assassin, Vinter saw his opening. With a speed no man should be capable of, Vinter drove a great blow with his gauntleted fist into Morghoul's diaphragm, stunning him just long enough for a final death blow. Knowing he had failed, Morghoul channeled all the power he could muster into a final wave of agony centered on Vinter. The ploy worked, Vinter lost momentum long enough for Morghoul to roll away from the blade. But Morghoul had only bought enough time for a frantic escape into the wastes of his homeland.
Weeks passed as he traveled. He did not know to what end of the earth he would have to go to have his revenge, but he knew that he would have it, no matter the cost. He cast aside his armor and donned a cloak purloined from a small village. With this disguise he was but another traveler on the roads of the iron kingdoms.
After wandering for what seemed an eternity, Morghoul found himself being waylaid by Knights in Silver armor, bearing a the banner of the Cygnus. The Knights demanded he remove his cowl and show his face. After refusing in their tongue, which the Lord Assassin had learned to better his trade, the first Knight drew his sword. Gripping his blade, Mercy tightly under the cloak with one hand and readying the Fan of Shadows with the other, Morghoul prepared to burst into the flurry of movement which would end this exchange. But moments before he sprang to action, he found himself being held tightly in place by an unseen force. Using what willpower he had, he attempted to break free of the spell. But despite his best effort, he could not concentrate any energy in his defense. It all seemed to leave him until he felt very empty. A young Cygnaran woman stepped into view wielding a spear which seemed to be the cause of Morghoul's situation. Addressing him, the woman introduced herself as Major Victoria Haley. In flawless Cygnaran, Morghoul identified himself as a pauper named Jekel. Seeing through his ruse, Haley ripped the robe from around Morghoul, exposing the Skorne for what he was. Without the protection of his armor, there was little chance Morghoul would escape.
Yet, even still, Morghoul refused to give in to fate. Using his anguish as a weapon, Morghoul ripped at the minds of the gathered Cygnarans with a wave of agony so intense, it blinded every man and woman present. After a few moments, Morghoul felt the grip on him loosen from Haley, and he was free. Calmly Morghoul walked to haley, pushing aside the few Knights who attempted to interpose themselves between him. Tearing the spear from her he calmly cut away one of the plates surrounding her right arm. She attempted to fight him off with her bare hands, but she was still reeling from the mental shock. Grabbing the now exposed pressure point, Morghoul forced Haley onto her knees. The Knights around them started to regain their sight, and fresh troops who heard the commotion came charging near the crowd, hoping to arrive in time to save their commander.
Before a shot was fired or blade raised in anger, Morghoul spoke one word in a booming voice which belied his frail body. "Parlay!"
End, Part 1.