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    08-20-2019, 12:55 PM
    Did you start doing this? I've just come upon this thread and haven't read a word of your stuff (but it sounds like it was really good!) but would be...
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    08-20-2019, 12:45 PM
    Boardy replied to a thread Hearts of Oak in Fan Fiction
    If that was helpful, great. If it doesn't make sense or made you feel like you were being judged (rather than critiqued) then forget about it. I'm...
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    08-17-2019, 10:41 AM
    Boardy replied to a thread Hearts of Oak in Fan Fiction
    Alright. Again, no expert here. But here's where I think the Show vs. Tell principle could apply. In this short passage, you 'tell' the reader a few...
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    08-17-2019, 09:52 AM
    Boardy replied to a thread Hearts of Oak in Fan Fiction
    Well Command & Conquer is good stuff. Usually in my experience C&C in this context is usually comments and criticism/critiques or something to that...
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    08-13-2019, 01:17 PM
    Boardy replied to a thread Cephalyx Short Story in Fan Fiction
    Hey BrokenCrow, it's a nice little teaser story you've got for us here. Like azoxystrobin mentioned, there are some grammar, spelling, and general...
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    08-13-2019, 09:44 AM
    Boardy replied to a thread A Soldier's Tale in Fan Fiction
    DSmithson, thanks for sharing your writing. I'm no pro, but it's clear to me that you're a solid writer. This piece is a lot better than a lot of...
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    08-12-2019, 04:43 PM
    Boardy replied to a thread Hearts of Oak in Fan Fiction
    Hey Echo, thank for sharing your story and your interesting ideas. Just curious how I can provide helpful feedback - what kind of help are you...
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    08-06-2019, 12:12 PM
    Ha. Well no pressure. I'm trying to get back into the game after a long time away. I just know it takes a lot of note taking, writing, and uploading...
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    08-03-2019, 08:55 AM
    This is an old thread I know, so this borders on necro-posting but I just wanted to chime in (again, I think) and say that I enjoy your battle...
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